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I can already see that this is a great song even 15 seconds in. I like the way it's established and it makes for a great song overall. Love the really bouncy rhythm as well as the more quiet bridge, which helps the buildup have more impact. I only wish the second drop had a bit deeper bass lol but that's just my opinion. Great work, hope to see more like this!

GEOD1M responds:

Thank you. Definitely more like this coming!

This is pretty cool! I think you could potentially add a bit more bass intertwined with the main melody. Personally I think that could be what @RusNG thought was missing in the background. Overall, flow is really good, and I like the progression of the song. Great instruments, great melody! Nice work.

AlertBass responds:

thank you bro

I like the way this was composed, as in the flow between each section. The beat is pretty good, except for the voice, which is a little off-putting because it's dissonant in regards to the main melody (although I'm sure that's just by design). One other thing is I don't understand the minute of silence at the end...

I did, in fact, enjoy the silly. This is fire.

ToufG responds:

Thank you! :)

Manny cooking 🔥 per the norm

I like this, but it's a little bit repetitive. I think it fits the mood well and is a pretty good house theme. The filters are used pretty well mostly, and the ending is great!

Are you scouted yet? I feel like these songs sure warrant it if not, lol.

The first part is very engaging and its piano part fits the theme well. I like the way you added the brass!
The lead into the second part is actually great! The synth definitely could use a key change, as the dissonance is a bit off-putting. Arpeggios work well with the backing bass. The drums are pretty good, 4/4 is a pretty solid baseline imo.
For real you CAN'T go wrong with those switch-ups lol they're great. I know this was made last year but keep it up!

FoxGames01 responds:

Hey thanks for your reviews! :D
Yes I'm scouted!

As an ambient song, it fits the theme very well! I think that this song makes good use of the glissandos and it helps develop the song too. There is a great use of dynamics as well. The ending is a bit abrupt and (I'm not really sure if you meant to do this and I might be wrong) but it feels like it doesn't resolve. Great song overall!

This is pretty good for not being finished. Maybe you could bolster the bass line after a few bars. I like the uneven rhythm of it, which really helps the mood of the song as a whole. Something you could do if you *do* end up finishing it is adding more of the main melody, and possibly extending it toward variation. Nice song though, I'm sure your other songs are great as well. :)

Hello everyone! I'm ☆optimá☆, and I make GD music for my custom levels and just to post to NG!

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